tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1834711313669762734.post3650760295131051768..comments2023-05-22T02:20:17.092-05:00Comments on AUTISM by Edward Byrne: Edward Byrnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09840825927726253150noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1834711313669762734.post-22839579513378910252011-01-19T14:39:30.009-06:002011-01-19T14:39:30.009-06:00I like how you foreshadow the storm in the first s...I like how you foreshadow the storm in the first stanza, and the contrast you make with the "festive music" of the brass band and the threat of "far off rumble" and thunder. <br /><br />I notice, too, as in other of your poems here, how your son has this sixth sense, what you so poignantly describe as often accompanying him, that he listens for and "knows" will change plans.<br /><br />A line I especially like: "horizon tinted/ with the hint of a new bruise".Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com